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Which of these EXPLANATORY PARAGRAPHs is good to submit. I need grammatical correction, an unbiased tone and proper sentence structure or I fail and I've got to submit it today!

To write a story, you need to start with an idea. Try studying other novels to help come up with one. When you have your idea, choose a writing medium, either by typing or writing your ideas in point form. You will find that if the idea is good you will have many points to write down. If you cannot write a lot on the topic, you can either change your topic or do some research. First start your research by looking either in an encyclopaedia or on-line. Type your topic into a search engine and read those results that suit your idea. Once you have your research, add to your points. As you go from point form to full sentences join the ideas together. Try to periodically reread your work to help keep a proper structure going. You can make your story long or short depending on what you choose to write. When you decide you’re finished write your conclusion and save your work. Have someone read your story to find errors and inconsistencies then make the proper changes. When all that is done share your story with family and friends or write another if you wish.

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To write a story, first a person needs to start with an idea. Studying other novels can help with creating one. When an idea is found, they should choose a writing medium, either by typing or writing ideas in point form. One will find that if the idea is good, they will have many points to write down. If they cannot write a lot on the topic, they can either change the topic or do some research. Start the research by looking either in an encyclopaedia or on-line. Type the topic into a search engine and read those results that suit the idea. Once a person has done their research, they should add to the original points. As the points begin to form full sentences, join the ideas together. The writer should periodically reread their work to help keep a proper structure going. They can make their story long or short depending on what they want to write. When the writer decides their finished, they should write a conclusion and save the work. A good idea is to have someone read the story for errors and inconsistencies then the writer can make proper changes. When all that is done the writer can share the story with family and friends or write another if they choose.
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